The Harbour

I'm lovin' these responses!

What, oh what happened in that room last night?!

Ok...I'm doing better than I have been recently. Another update in just over two weeks!

All ready for your reading pleasure...or pain

Chapter 33

I´m so going to ...well ..hrm Please dear Toni, can we have some more?


Like NOW?

Oh my gosh, a whole month has passed! I'll make it up over the holidays, an extra one or two.

[Drum roll please] Ladies and gentlemen...Chapter 34: When words are not enough

I'm on a roll this week!

Had the day off so thought I'd make up for some of that lost time.

Here ya go! Chapter 35: Full moon?

hahaha “...But my insides still feel a bit weird about the whole thing.” there seems to be a lot of that going on right now! lol Love your update!

Thank you birthday boy! I had no idea you were reading my wee tale!

Full moon ?

It could be a full moon! Or something else....

I am a wee bit behind again, Toni.
I promise I will try to catch up with The Harbour SOON!

That's okay Sugah. I appreciate it when you do eventually, because you always take time to absorb the language and the visuals, and comment in such interested detail...you are totally worth the wait!

With that said...I've posted another Chapter. There's so much happening, I've really got to get you guys caught up!

Soooo boys and girls, I give you Chapter 36: Tempting Fate

So many updates to The Harbour lately. Yay!

(I've been reading, but really need to catch up on commenting. )

Don't you worry Em. I can see from my guest stats that you visit

I was supposed to work today, and my boss surprised me and called and said he would work for me! (I was up late covering an event that ran until the wee hours of the morning). Yaaayy for cool bosses! He does have his moments!

So, I thought I'd use the unexpected "Me" time to sort some pix, and was able to post another installment!

Chapter 37: Friends and relatives

*argh* You left us with teenage love angst and jump to...to...*argh* hehe

Well done!

Lady T wrote:

That's okay Sugah. I appreciate it when you do eventually, because you always take time to absorb the language and the visuals, and comment in such interested detail...you are totally worth the wait!

Happy New Year!

Nice update Toni...but one thing...you first said Marco went to Europe, and then Carolyn met up with Kyle and got back together with him and the next day Kyle called from France...Did I miss something as I was reading or what?!?!

No, no.....there were actually a couple of years in between. Marco was back and Kyle just happened to be in France at that time. I'll have to think of rewording that for folks who didn't read Book I. It's kinda why I did this chapter, to fill in the blanks for people who started with the current book.

Think I'll just remove the France reference, and clarify that Marco went to Europe for a few months. Thanks for the most invaluable feedback Tim!

UPDATE: Fixed! Do you mind taking a read again when you have time, and seeing if it's less confusing? Pretty please, with sugar on top.

ilikefishfood wrote:

No, no.....there were actually a couple of years in between. Marco was back and Kyle just happened to be in France at that time. I'll have to think of rewording that for folks who didn't read Book I. It's kinda why I did this chapter, to fill in the blanks for people who started with the current book.

Think I'll just remove the France reference, and clarify that Marco went to Europe for a few months. Thanks for the most invaluable feedback Tim!

UPDATE: Fixed! Do you mid taking a read again when you have time, and seeing if it's less confusing? Pretty please, with sugar on top.

OOooh...See...that's what happens when I have so much to catch up on...I thought I could just jump right back in...lol I will give it another peruse for ya!

It reads much better for me now...lol Thanks for catering to me! I really like it, you did a very nice job making it a very dramatic situation of how not communicating can really screw things up...people have to learn to communicate, while with emotion, but without anger and with a willingness to listen to the other person! Well done!

Grykon wrote:

OOooh...See...that's what happens when I have so much to catch up on...I thought I could just jump right back in...lol I will give it another peruse for ya!

No no, it's good. I'm trying to write Book II as a stand alone story, so this kind of feedback is perfect. Keep it coming!

New Chappie! I'm on a roll now. I'm catching up with sorting out my pictures, so you can expect an update at least once a week going forward.

"Everything is going to be alright, she thought to herself."

Famous last words...*insert spooky drum roll here" *Mwuahahahahahahaha*


heheh Nice little update!

Hehehe Everything`s going....... poor little Carolyn. You haven´t been around Miss Toni for so long haven´t you????

You guys slay me!!!!!

Poor, naive Carolyn

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Don't you worry Em. I can see from my guest stats that you visit sunny

I didn't know LJ had guest stats that could tell you that.

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Hehehe Everything`s going....... poor little Carolyn. You haven´t been around Miss Toni for so long haven´t you????

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so you can expect an update at least once a week going forward.

Yay! That means I'd better get caught up on commenting. As soon as I get to feeling better I've got to remind myself to do that.